John Greens debut novel for young adults, *The Fault in Our Stars*, is celebrated for its witty, heartbreaking voice and its generous use of idiomatic English. Phrases such as to fall apart at the seams, to have a heartattack of a laugh, or its the best thing about any party are embedded in the narrative and help shape the characters personalities. Translating these idioms into Indonesian is far from a wordforword exercise; it requires a culturallinguistic balance that preserves humor, tone, and the emotional weight of the original text.
Idioms function as shortcuts to feeling. They convey attitudes, cultural references, and relational dynamics without lengthy exposition. In *The Fault in Our Stars*, Hazel and Augustus rely on idiomatic speech to mask vulnerability, display affection, and inject irony. When a translator replaces an idiom with a literal rendering, the affective nuance can disappear or become unintentionally comic. For example, translating to go out on a limb literally would sound like keluar dari cabang, which is nonsensical in Indonesian. A careful choice of an equivalent expression bermain di atas garis or mengambil risiko besar restores the intended implication of daring.
Original context: Augustus says, Im falling apart at the seams after a painful conversation.
Potential Indonesian equivalents:
Choice: hancur lebur is preferred for its idiomatic punch and brevity.
Original context: Hazel describes Augustuss giggle.
Indonesian rendering: tertawa sampai hampir pingsan or tertawa sampai terasa seperti serangan jantung. The former is idiomatic, the latter is a literal translation that works because pingsan is a common hyperbolic intensifier in everyday speech.
Original context: Augustus states, The best thing about any party is the people you meet.
Indonesian equivalent: hal paling menyenangkan di setiap pesta adalah orangorang yang kamu temui. The phrase hal paling menyenangkan mirrors the casual tone of the best thing.
Original context: Hazel says, Im on cloud nine after that concert.
Indonesian version: aku berada di awan kesembilan is a direct translation but rarely used. A more natural rendering is aku sangat bahagia or aku melayang di atas awan the latter keeps the cloud imagery while sounding idiomatic.
Original context: Augustus tells Hazel, Lets call it a day and go home.
Indonesian rendering: Mari kita akhiri dulu or sudahlah, selesai dulu both convey the sense of stopping work or activity for the moment.
Original context: Hazel remarks about a character who overcommits.
Indonesian equivalent: menggigit lebih banyak daripada bisa dikunyah is understood but sounds stiff. A common Indonesian idiom is mengambil beban yang terlalu berat or menggigit terlalu besar. The latter preserves culinary imagery and is readily understood.
Original context: The narrator notes a characters lingering resentment.
Indonesian rendering: menyimpan dendam or bawa rasa tidak puas capture the core meaning. However, to keep the figurative flavor, translators sometimes use selalu merasa terbebani or menyimpan beban di bahu.
In most cases, an Indonesian idiom that mirrors the English image works best. Yet, there are moments when the original phrasing is deliberately awkward to reflect a teens voice and should therefore be kept slightly offbeat. For instance, Augustuss flamboyant description of a goldenticketlike experience is rendered as seperti tiket emas a direct borrowing that signals his penchant for grandiose language, while the surrounding narrative continues in smoother Indonesian prose.
When idioms are rendered skillfully, Indonesian readers experience the same blend of humor and melancholy that English readers do. They hear Hazels sarcasm, Augustuss optimism, and the bittersweet tone that defines the novel. Poorly handled idioms, on the other hand, can create confusion or unintentionally comic moments that undercut the intended pathos. Translators therefore act as cultural mediators, preserving the emotional arc while adapting the linguistic landscape.
Translating the idiomatic fabric of *The Fault in Our Stars* into Indonesian is a delicate art that requires more than lexical knowledge; it calls for an intuitive grasp of both cultures, the characters voices, and the novels tonal shifts. By selecting natural Indonesian equivalents, employing vivid paraphrases when necessary, and occasionally retaining the original idiom for stylistic effect, a translator can recreate the novels authentic resonance for an Indonesian audience. The result is a text that feels both familiar and fresh a true fault in our stars turned into a shared literary sky.
